Inquisitive eyes,
through spring's cradle ~
through spring's cradle ~
Author notes
Prompt ~ The Visitor
A contest entry
- in 10 stupendous words by Lavender Butterfly.
515 points, ended December 1, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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creatively drawn... x
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oh, this is such a lovely write! I love every line of this
Good luck
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Thanks a lot.
I am pleased that you enjoyed my write.
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charming
this enchantingly makes us want to take our curiosity in different directions, and then you give a nice rounding between first line and last. also etcetera recircling imagery fittingly.
how I'd seen it initially still applies with possible creatures having an elegant or delicate onlooking experience over an expanded species. I was even sensing a flutter of arrival...
but my daughter, with whom I shared it with another reread for myself, acted out human pendulum of baby at final word astonished how it became more than cute with scene -- and ironically we index everything around for our intrigues.
sweet swiveling thought for memorable moment,
called Carolyn -
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Thanks a lot.
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