“Bullshit!” I exclaim as the curtains close with certainty.
I can’t believe that’s all that I got for my money.
You seemed to be enjoying it almost as much as me.
I sure don’t find this even the tiniest bit funny.
As I’m leaving I see you as you're departing for the night.
I jump into my car and follow you a while.
I know that what I’m doing isn’t really right
but it’s just curiosity – my intent is not hostile.
Parking in the street, I see your open window
and your silhouette inside so mysteriously inviting.
Sitting there, I cannot help, for as the wind blows,
I see you standing there and I find it so exciting.
I quietly approach and I see you glance my way.
I stay safely back, hidden in the shadows.
With music in the background, in a sensuous display,
you slowly do a striptease as your remove your clothes.
You lie your naked form, displayed for me to see,
upon the altar of your bed and you hands roam free
in an languorous fashion, touching intimately
the places you respond to as you live your fantasy.
I see the darkness of your nipple, taut upon your breast.
I hear your cries of pleasure as you pull it tight.
Your hand continues roaming, now upon a quest
to explore your pleasure - passion reigns tonight.
Watching you, as you lie there, I feel myself expand
wanting your sweet touch, but I know my place.
Reaching down, I free myself and hold it in my hand.
It’s almost like you know it from the smile upon your face.
I see you move your fingers. They trail thru darkest hair
and expose your opening, glistening in the light.
You begin to masturbate as if you were unaware
that I am matching rhythms outside in the night.
I hear your cries of pleasure, I watch as your eyes weep
until you reach your zenith, your movements will not cease.
With a final joyful cry, your fingers slide in deep
and as you explode in passion, I too find release.
I know that you’re aware that I’ve seen everything.
You’ve put on a performance before an audience of one.
Now we’ll go our separate ways without acknowledging
the excitement that we felt and the things we’ve done.
Author notes
It's a bit long... sorry... but I do hope you enjoy it 
Prompt: Window Watching (http://allpoetry.com/poem/4605397)
Picture Credit: http://blackmarker.deviantart.com/art/Peeping-Tom-13068300
No limit; What I want you to do is go through my writes pick one that you like and answer it. I want you to write something in reference to the write that you have chosen. Anything goes just label your writes appropriately. Please I do not want to read a book and you can write any form you want.
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel by hotchocolate.
1100 points, ended December 13, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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Wonderful write! It had me enthralled from beginning to end. Good luck in future contests!
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Wow~
Now this is some write my Friend and from beginning to end- had me on the edge of my seat- this is like a cross between a Hitchcock thriller and a passionate play~ do I even make sense
but Excellent verse!
Gets the energy on high...
Tight rhyme also
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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This is great and a free show!!!!! Why didn't I think of that? No money spent LOL!!! Thank you for your entry and good luck
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This was really, really good. Very, very sensual without being too graphic. Pulls the reader in completely. One of the best I've ever read. Was it long? i didn't think so!
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this poem is wow.. I like it a lot. the imagery is vivid and hot . I think that you did an excellent job with this poem. I don't think that its that long, but then I used to write 300 + lines..
good luck
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lol..I am sure you succeeded in the emotional
part of a womans needs, You as a stalker ,naaaaaaa but good poetry here, good luck
Voe
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Made me check the curtains!!
Very sensual and unique. It's a spooky thought, but certainly the erotica is beautifully done. Very nicely done and very sexy.
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