Snowy wintery days
Nothing but hot cocoa and warm baths
Of course building snowmen on the lawn
Winter is here you can't ignore
Frosty nose from all the cold
Lights dangle from the Christmas trees
Angels singing from above
Kids playing full of love
Elves drinking eggnog at the North Pole
Author notes
Acrostic Form, I also did a background and I used the ten words in my poem:
Winter
Snowflakes
Frosty
Cold
Lights
Christmas tree
Angels
Elves
Eggnog
North Pole
A contest entry
- Allpoetry Kids Christmas Bash 2008 (win a gold membership) by Little Eagle.
4200 points, ended January 11, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The background you made for this poem is beautiful! I love the colours and the softness of it
and the poem is lovely - one day I hope that I have a white Christmas - your poem has bought it to life for me wonderfully, very nicely written
Merry Christmas!
Polly
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Hey I really like the background you created. Great poem...flows well and you did a great job with all the restrictions you had
good luck
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I love all the Christmasy imagery in this poem! You paint such a fun and beautiful canvas with your words. Great acrostic! Best of luck in the contest
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simply sweet - this piece incorporates all the goodness of the season...
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Oh, cute, cute, cute and a half!! Ah, it must be Christmas time as this is the first Christmas acrostic of the season that I've discovered...fine...
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this is cute!
i absolutley love the winter. its a beautiful season.
i love this piece. its a wonderful read.
your Faerie
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Very nice poem: a word bank and an Acrostic as well. Very well done. The flow is great except for the last sentence. I have looked for a change and I could find another sentence which would make things much better. Try "happy" & "ceremonies", for instance... Elves complete the happy ceremonies.
What do you think of it?
Maybe you have a much better solution.
Just go for it. Have another look please.
Anna.
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This is a very nice acrostic, Ashley they're fun to write and I see you've added one of your beautiful backgrounds.
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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