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An Ode to the Breast





I love the angle of a woman’s breast
As it curves pear shaped into the nipple.
With tumescence always temptingly full.
Seeing beads glide off them in the shower
an areolas of strawberry red.
How I wish I had two mouths to suckle
but I must love them each one at a time.
and try my best to half my affection,
lest one breast become slightly deformed.
I cuff them gently in my hands and smile.
Pet them warmly in deep intimacy
I feel their suppleness against my cheek
and I worship the goddess who bears them.







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  • no longer a member
    December 2, 2008

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    Beautifully erotic and filled with heated imagery. That shower scene about put me off my chair.

    Ahhhhhhh so so nice for a sensual woman too.

    *chuckle* ~Bramble


  • JinSays gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    How I wish I had two mouths to suckle
    but I must love them each one at a time.
    and try my best to half my affection,
    lest one breast become slightly deformed.


    wonderful.
    thank you.
    Love,
    jin


  • Amera gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    You poor man! You have been neglected for way too long. This is the second body part poem I have read of yours today. Don't you care for champagne glass shaped? I think pear shaped is a little weird.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 30, 2008

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    *stands up and cheers* YAY, i don't think anyone could have put it any better, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest