She played them all
Abused their emotions
Even the players
She had them all wrapped around her finger
Every single one of them
It was beyond the temptress of the devil
She became the devil herself
Smiling and frolicking between plays
Lying her way around their wallets
And then slapping them
Shattering their hearts
It's all the same to her
Money and sex
Is simply
Money and sex
Nothing more
Author notes
2008 prewrite (I just picked a random one)
i believe my number was 5
A contest entry
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Comments
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First, thank you for entering my contest. This was an ok poem. i agree with shattered gypsy, that you should change the last line to sex and money just to give it something different, instead of repeating yourself. But other than that. It was a good write.
Your Judge
Kaycee
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Flawless, except, the second to last line, when you said, "money and sex" for the second time, I would change it to "sex and money" just for change of pace from the first time you say it. Idk, I just like it better like that
This wasn't what I was expecting, but I know girls like this. My whole school is chalk filled with them. "nothing more" yup, that sums it up! Thanks for taking the time to enter!
Mylee -
indeed 5 is a lovely number! Your title is
"Smiling Liars Was Her Game"
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