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Redemption Rising


Risky ways grow bold-
Rage unfolds
Regret descends
Resolve begins
Redemption rising.

Author notes

option selected: write a short poem 10-15 words about pain, heartbreak, addiction. cliches without the cliche.

Author Notes:

Lives out of control often reach a stage where redemption is the only path.

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    August 8

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    Ahhh. There is a name for this type of poem. The name escapes me, though. It is when all the lines begin with the same letter. You did a fantastic job on this. Beautifully written.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Xianaria gold member
    July 29
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    I like this ~
    Simple structure, but packed with straighth-forward reality. Nicely done!


  • awannabepoet
    July 29
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    Recite the serenity and take another white chip, this is all I can say.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    July 29
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    you are featured

    Few words but they pack a punch and are so thought provoking
    you are featured in Todays Poem

    Blessings always

    Rend

  • Bjarne gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Well Done

    Per your request, see my message.
    bj

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