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without ink

river inspires me
flowing in motion.
fingers scribble on rocks
without a writers block.

what it writes
lasts for generations,
books wither,
hard disks erase,
though it's writings lasts.

pictorial at times.
shapes stalagmites

and stalactites,
dripping through roof
building on floor.

there is no taboo
it pens without ink.
it's imagery.
human writers have blocks
failing to capture full.

Author notes

I am hydrologist, river always removes writers block in me. I look to river for inspiration

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  • Topaze
    December 3, 2008
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    Well done, my best wishes.


  • ShatterglassSecret
    December 1, 2008

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    your writing was clear and concise, flowing like the rivers that inspire you. it trickled easily through my mind, touching my heart with its simple descriptions. thank you for your beautiful entry.