How should I even think this is real?
You send me flowers every friday.
We go to the park and sit watching the sun set for hours.
You make my life feel like heaven.
You sweep me off my feet and carry me away from any pain.
You hold me tight and you love me.
Will I wake up?
Is this a dream?
This just has to be a dream.
You baby girl have to be a dream.
I never thought I could find perfection like you.
My life is becoming more and more like a fair tale.
You made me fall in love with you.
I will stay that way forever.
I'm so in love with my little fairy tale
Author notes
"How do you document real life when real life's getting more like fiction each day?"
A contest entry
- Quotes from RENT!! by DramaQueen469.
550 points, ended December 22, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Awww how gorgeous!!! WELL DONE, thankyou for entering and good luck!!
~*~DramaQueen469~*~ -
I love the concept, and idea from the poem
It's lovely.
You did a good job writing it, although I think it could have had a better flow
Good luck in the contest <3
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