Chains forever bound
By faith and loyalty,
Honesty and conversation,
And trust.
This will last
Forever
I am yours
And you are mine
Always
Author notes
prompt: poem starting with the letter "L"
A contest entry
- Poems That Begin With The Letter 'L'. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 112 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Awww this is so romantic and that's exactly what I like, something a litlte more upbeat and happier, it's so nice to see someone who believes in that special bond between two people, very few people get that these days. Nicely wrote.
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I love this
It seems though, that you don't want to be theirs forever... At least that's what I'm getting from the piece, because of the choice of words (chains), although the rest seems like you want to be.
Good luck in the contest And great write
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chains is the metaphor for the bond... strong chains are unbreakable
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