Of the two of us
I was always
The conversationalist
You were the one
Who was short on words
Yet never
Let anything go unspoken
So it was on that day
Short, sweet and to the point
And for once I was
Speechless
A contest entry
- Can you hear me now? by darell.
500 points, ended December 1, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Effective
A powerful piece that packs
a pretty decent punch.
The visuals were quite good.
An intriguing take on the prompt
that gave food for thought.
Thank you for your entry


