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A Man Named Awesome

Chorus:
Maybe I was too much of a flirt.
Was it because I said I liked your shirt?
He will never know how much I liked him.
I will always love a man named Awesome.


I don't know how to describe this feeling.
All I know is you got my heart a-reeling.
It's so rare that I ever feel this way.
And, I was crushed when I found out you wouldn't stay.

Chorus

I don't know when I will ever feel like that again.
And, I guess it's true that all good things come to an end.
I should have seen through your translation.
But, I guess I was blinded by my infatuation.

Chorus


Letting you go was the hardest thing I ever had to do.
And, not a day goes by that I didn't think of you.
But, now I'm so glad that we are friends.
And,  I hope our friendship never ends.

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  • lauren nicole
    April 21

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    You always comment on my pieces of work, which I thank you for by the way. I felt I had to return the favor (even if it is small, as I don't come on here often now!). I absolutely fell in love with this song. The chorus is so fun, and I can imagine hearing it on the radio. Very well written, it flows very nicely!

    • HaleyMary
      April 22
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      Thanks, Lauren. You know, I had never thought of it as a song that could be on the radio. I guess I can underestimate my talent sometimes. Reading this song makes me sad sometimes. But, I'm still friends with Kevin, so it can't be all that bad.

      The truth is, I was in love with Kevin, and I think I will always love Kevin. I actually gave up a man I loved to keep my self respect in life. Some days I regret it, but honestly I do need an emotionally mature guy to have a happy relationship and feel respected and cared for.

      Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

      Haley Mary
  • i had to let everyone go for my life was to cluttered and how can I be a hermit with people around great job
    love your bro rev papa

    • HaleyMary
      April 5

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      Thanks, William. I don't think the guy is a hermit, though he does spend a lot of time on the computer on some sites, probably less since he's been off youtube, though.

      Thanks for reading.

      Haley Mary

  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 30, 2008

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    <

    Writing is good, it helps us work things through in our minds and lives.
    We all tend to go to the familiar, in both writing and people, but it is when we shed the shell of familiar living that we learn to grow beyond our small existence and become more than we were.

  • Sandra R Reynolds silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    Another great one. Haley Mary


  • Desire gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Oh My ~

    Now I have to chuckle at the Awesome line
    I can see this man kissing his arm while flexing a muscle or trying to
    -rolls on the floor laughing-
    I might hurt myself from laughing so hard~
    This is Brilliant and such a tight rhyme~
    the lyrics just roll from Your tongue~
    Excellent as always~
    You know I imagine someone such as this- walking into poles and such~
    or tripping over chairs because he is staring so hard at a woman walking by~
    (the woman happened to have been a man in drag)

    Keep that quill dancing Beautiful~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~

    • HaleyMary
      November 29, 2008
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      Ah, don't laugh too hard. He's pretty cool. Kind of like the older brother I never had.

      Haley Mary
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