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Let me ask of you

Please don't ask me to do
what you know I can't
My heart
just won't let me
This is all I have left
to hold onto to
Ask anything else
you want
But please, don't ask me
to stop loving you

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    November 29, 2008
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    This echoes the words I spoke to steven and in a way still always will echo in my heart, it kind of reminds me in a sad way, but a beautiful way at the same time. I hope that you have more sucess with love than I do however, for your sake. But I'm still young, maybe in a few years time...