Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Music

the tapping,
The rapping.
the flow of such a wondrous thing.

the emotions set, 

Pen poised.

could it be the flow of the stringed instruments?

The way beats are put together?

or just the way it makes me feel?

Music....

the noise that poetry lacks.

But all in the same good.

Music...

To be inspired by...

the instrumentals.

 

A contest entry

whispering in your ear

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • penman gold member
    December 23, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Excellent

    Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Topaze
    December 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Well done, my best wishes.


  • ShatterglassSecret
    December 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    what a wonderful thing to be inspired by! thank you for your entry. i will go about my day with a singing heart.


  • Scyphon
    November 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Great write, good questions. We get caught in the music, but why is it really? And is it different reasons for different songs? Best of luck


    • HpWICKEDangel
      November 30, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      different songs, strum different emotions. well for me they do.

1 - 5 of 5