I'm searching for the words to say
And wishing to grab the ones coming out of my mouth.
You've found someone new.
I wish you the best..
I guess.
I won't let you see the tears escaping my eyes,
As you melt everytime you say her name
What does she have?
That I just can't seem to get?
But no one has it easy.
I find myself waking in the middle of the night
Crying and not knowing exactly why.
And then I remember the last thing you said to me.
I'd do anything for her.
And I'd do anything to take her place.
My heart sings your name.
The butterflies in my stomach
Dance at the sound of your voice
I just want you to hold me.
One more time and whisper those
Three Forbidden Words.
(I.love.you.)
Author notes
Yep. It's personal.
Comments
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great
great job
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Ayla this is amazing the emotions that flow through this really stir the soul. to call i love you forbidden words really makes someone think. it also portrays what we all feel when the person we love finds their love elsewhere. we say we are happy but in truth we are not. a job very well done!


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At long last, my heart has found a reason
Yesterday's bliss is today's final treason
Love can't exist without painful times
And we bury them all in concrete rhymes.
I
you, Ayla.
Your poetry is one of many beautiful things about you. However, I wish that it were the only thing that could be sad...
Always,
Vhoori (Emily)

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ayla....ur in love....omg!!!!!!!! i hope he realizes what he has....he better hold u again or ill go cookie on him!!!!
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I almost cried. Actually I did a little. Reading this pushed me over the edge. It's tragic. And even as I hate this kind of feeling, I bitterly love it.
I loved the brutal truth in this. Amazing writing.

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deep
Like a phantom limb
Love can be amputated
Taken away
Yet it’s presence lingers
Haunting deep throughout
Longing for it to return
A ghost is not enough
Pain & loss meshed together with hope
As the phantom in the void tugs away at your heartstrings
Love stays in its own little way


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