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I wish you the best...I guess.

I'm searching for the words to say
And wishing to grab the ones coming out of my mouth.
You've found someone new.
I wish you the best..
I guess.
I won't let you see the tears escaping my eyes,
As you melt everytime you say her name
What does she have?
That I just can't seem to get?
But no one has it easy.

I find myself waking in the middle of the night
Crying and not knowing exactly why.
And then I remember the last thing you said to me.
I'd do anything for her.
And I'd do anything to take her place.
My heart sings your name.
The butterflies in my stomach
Dance at the sound of your voice
I just want you to hold me.
One more time and whisper those
Three Forbidden Words.
(I.love.you.)

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Yep. It's personal.

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  • great

    great job


  • babyonboard
    December 3, 2008

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    Ayla this is amazing the emotions that flow through this really stir the soul. to call i love you forbidden words really makes someone think. it also portrays what we all feel when the person we love finds their love elsewhere. we say we are happy but in truth we are not. a job very well done!


  • Vhoori
    December 1, 2008

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    At long last, my heart has found a reason
    Yesterday's bliss is today's final treason
    Love can't exist without painful times
    And we bury them all in concrete rhymes.

    I you, Ayla.
    Your poetry is one of many beautiful things about you. However, I wish that it were the only thing that could be sad...

    Always,
    Vhoori (Emily)


  • Cookie Sasquatch
    November 29, 2008

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    ayla....ur in love....omg!!!!!!!! i hope he realizes what he has....he better hold u again or ill go cookie on him!!!!


  • Heartbreaker Eyes
    November 29, 2008

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    I almost cried. Actually I did a little. Reading this pushed me over the edge. It's tragic. And even as I hate this kind of feeling, I bitterly love it.
    I loved the brutal truth in this. Amazing writing.


  • Electric Chestnut
    November 29, 2008

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    deep

    Like a phantom limb
    Love can be amputated
    Taken away
    Yet it’s presence lingers
    Haunting deep throughout
    Longing for it to return
    A ghost is not enough
    Pain & loss meshed together with hope
    As the phantom in the void tugs away at your heartstrings
    Love stays in its own little way

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