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Making It Up To You

 

 

I see the disappointment in your eyes as you walk out the back door.

I run to put on my robe and run with my heals clicking on the floor.

Opening the back door I run to find your car parked in the last stall,

I run over and see your cum trail as I walk pass this wall.

 

As you turn the key I knock forcefully on your window,

"Do you remember me darling?"  I wanna give you another show.

You open up the door and invite me into the backseat,

ripping off my panties you stick three of your fingers deep inside me.

 

I start to moan as my body girates to your fingers,

you know just how to tease me as your tongue dives in and lingers.

All over my crotch and with every inch I start to shake,  

you raise my ass with your hands giving me more than I take.

 

I feel my juices start to flow as your tongue licks my ass.

You work your way from the bottom then back up for another pass.

I am now breathing heavily and feel myself explode,

just hearing you sigh as you drink me full makes me lose control.

 

My turn, as I pick you up and throw you hard onto the wet seat below.

I start to suckle your luscious breasts and feel your nipples as they grow.

You turn me on as I watch your eyes begin to roll,

I hold your legs up spread eagle and suck your pussy whole.

 

I run my tongue deep inside you as your body starts to writhe.

Running my hands all over your body, you blow me a passionate kiss.

Your body starts to tremble as I squeeze your tits you start to cum,

All over my tongue it falls as I move up and offer you some.

 

You place your mouth around my soaking tongue and devour every ounce.

Tasting your erotic juices fresh from your sopping pouch.

We fall on top of each other so sated and out of breath,

as I hand you my number and a bagfull of tokens for your next erotic trip.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

This is the porm that I chose from your page: Window Watching-http://allpoetry.com/poem/4605397

I hope that you like this one!

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  • Desire gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    OMG!

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    - drops *coffee -
    Now this is one Beauty of a verse and Holy Smokes Jeremy
    What images You have delivered also stained the Mind with
    Excellent!!!
    Bravo~
    Woot!
    - walks into a wall -
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    WOW!!!! This is great and you did exactly what I asked for! Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • onesugar gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    A wonderful response my friend..deliciously HOT and a pleasure to read..Good luck
    ~sugar~


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 29, 2008

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    once again this is something that just shines you honestly are a man of words, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest