I am Gemini.
Always in juxtapose
me, myself.
Undaunted by
outcome discerned
by either or.
I am Gemini.
Carefree,
untamed,
for no rope woven
can hold them.
I am Gemini.
a muse within
a muse,
a contradiction appalled
at times...
by us.
I am Gemini.
A loving
tender
soul resides,
twixt the
doppelganger
abrasive,
demanding
and wry.
I am Gemini.
He and I.
A contest entry
- Mm'kay. It's Free-verse Time :] by Sunkissed xo.
400 points, ended February 19, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very well penned
A great write indeed -
A great write
really powerful and magical.
I like the fact that it's not very cliched and hackneyed.
Good work
Thanks for entering my contest, and best of luck. -
Great!
Here I am again, still loving this great poem. Thank you for joining the group and putting your effort into same. -
This is great
I love the flow
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a double treat
can you bi locate???
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Interesting
I don't think I have seen another poem on Gemini in this vein. Grabs the imagination. Very good work, Poet. I really was pleased to read this.
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Ooo jeepers, this is excellent! I like the fact that it leaves you with something to really ponder, and how you have alluded to the concept of stars and star signs. It really adds a great mystical atmosphere to the poem. Brilliant use of vocabulary. Ahh this quite blew me away, especially the ending - it says so much in just three words. Well done Ocean
Keep penning your masterpieces!
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