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My World Is Full Of Fantasies

Come on,
And step into my world.

Enjoy the music,
The fantasy.

Enjoy every word.

If you turn to you left,
You'll find the big bright lights.
The chorus of music that fixes your ears.
The beautiful gowns,
The big puffy clouds,
The halos,
The harps,
And the cheers.

Now lets keep up our tour,
And try to look away.
So you'll enjoy going the next way.

If you turn to your right,
Oh! What a sight!
My garden is filled with
Red, yellow, oranges, and blues.
It's to beautiful for words.
All that you can do,
Is run right to it,
And dance in it with no shoes.
You can lay,
You can play,
You can simply sniff away.
Relaxing is easy for you.

Quick!
Try to keep up.
Our tour isn't done.
Let's go explore,
There's alot left to do!

Now let's go straight,
Your gonna wish you never ate,
For there's glorious, glorious food!
Smell that beef?
Or the pork?
I see protein and protein, galore!
How bout fruit?
Apples, Bananas, Grapes are enjoyable, too!
There's a HUGE dinning table,
Come on, have a seat.
Vegatables?
Fruit?
I'd take the meat!
Enjoy!
There's enough for an army or two!
If you ever get hungery, just call on you-know-who!

It's hard to turn away,
But before we over stuff,
Let's  turn back around,
For I've missed some fun.
Has anyone made bad choices when in love?
Here's your chance to go back.
To fix mistakes,
To fix the bad.
Enjoying the dim lighting?
How bout the cushy heart chairs?
The love songs,
About in the air?
The men in tuxedoes?
The women in gowns?
The ballroom is ready,
You better dance,
Before the clock strickes twelve!
Your lover's soft lips,
Their sweet smell,
Their good taste.

Sorry,
Don't mean to be a haste.

But it's time to leave.
Gotta go.
Adios!
Now you can make your own fantasy.
Just make it what YOU want.

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  • DevynnLaRiesa
    December 20, 2008
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    I love your world of fantasies! It's wonderful.
    I ♥♥♥♥ U! (NSW)


  • xpinkxkissesx
    December 5, 2008

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    To fix mistakes,
    To fix the bad.

    wow B, I wish we could really do that and go back. This poem really speaks out to people(: i ♥ this one too,,(:


  • Topaze
    December 3, 2008
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    Very well done, the magical mystery tour. My best wishes.


  • ShatterglassSecret
    December 1, 2008

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    i love the playful nature of this poem and the way you use poetry to construct a veritable universe of delights. your rhyme scheme skipped and gamboled merrily, pulling me (your reader) through each verse with ease. thank you for this artistic entry.