A rabbit hole to the trained eye
Digs past roots, soots, and rocks
Past laws, flaws, and goodbye
An absolute commute past clocks.
Where time stands still as chrome
Hugs are held honest and whole.
Love by the oz at sweetest home.
Never blue, dreams come true console.
Battered trust, lust, and spirit
In this tangible dreamland of bliss
Ignorance is so petty we don't hear it.
Attempts at sabotage forever miss.
Embracing is where wonderlands exist
Below rabbit holes and beyond the abyss.
Author notes
Might change it around I'm not sure yet. I haven't written anything in a while so I was just getting something down.
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Comments
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Wonderfully expressed.
Good flow.
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true to every word of hoppful wonder and wished for bliss. KillerRain
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wicked
i jus trippdoutto that dud i lik how discriptve u r aquaman
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