I tumble across streets,
a plain wrapper.
Few notice.
Few care.
I am nothing
except to those
who love me.
To them
I am everything.
In that I can tumble
away in the wind
fully content.
Author notes
Plain Jane from the male perspective
In a list
A contest entry
- Plain Janes by Janetheplain.
475 points, ended December 23, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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I'm very glad you put this to the male perspective! Put some diversity into the contest thanks. Very beautiful metaphor. Jane
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A substantial piece of poetry, indeed!!
Beautifully written.
Something about the poem is very satisfying.
Thanks for sharing. God bless!
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Great!!
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i feel like this poem some times, i think you expressed it well, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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