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Remember

All I have to do
is close my mind
to outer forces.
Open my heart
to the summer
of life.

And I remember.

Sweater than Braeburn
Wilder than roaming dogs
More dazzling than childhood fears
I remember.

And all I can do,
is smile.

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  • abuyi
    March 10

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    i sense freedom in this..
    this is very subtle and sweet write.. gives something to ponder on and leaves a nice positive vibe.
    i hope everyone feels the same to have that smile.

    this is write is too small and you choice of words could have been better..

    thanks for sharing it with us..