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Mine!

The crescent Moon stole
across the white of your pillow

Softly she kissed the amulet
and I felt the charge

You rose like smoke
from a November fire
and blew through the window
to lie on the fleece
spread before me

Naked
you slept as I took my prize
held by the charm
unwoken by my touch

I tasted you
tested you
knew you

a second kiss as my Moon departs
locks you to my love

You wake to my eyes
and welcome me

Mine

Till the Moon
sets you free




Author notes

Option 3: 
SENSUAL WORD BANK  (Use five of the words below)
 
Mandarin, fleece, loft, amulet, cicada, droplet, depth,
window, sapphire, gazelle, crucifix, dimple, valley, lily,
Charm, elusive, prayer, haunt, jar, motion, curtain, lie,
Karma, sail, white, pillow, amuse, crescent, betray, torn,
Talisman, wind, paisley, chapter, almond, bell, kneel

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  • Dalaney gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    Haunting....beautiful....the voice of a heart so full of poetry. This piece of free verse is exceptional. I thank
    you for once again stealing my breath away. Love, Lane