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pretty when pinched

 

 

 

your fingers inked me a hue
with a secret language of hot frisson
coursing through my skin...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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just a feeling that I got from a poem

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  • Eldrich Capricorn
    March 14

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    short, sweet and beautiful! Such a lovely little poem. You can convey some seriously sexy/sensual imagery with your words.

  • Bruce silver member
    January 6

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    I had to look up frisson, but it's a perfect use of the word. "Inked me a hue" is very original. Another great one!


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 24, 2008

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    Passion and sensuality in only a few lines. This is wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing.


    • ariazephyrzoe gold member
      December 25, 2008
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      Thank you and also for another dose of RBC on my cheeks ...Happy New Year


  • chilali
    December 24, 2008

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    Short and hot! haha. I loved this. Well done Anna

    Much love
    Ylova


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    oooooouuuuu!!!!

    Short and Sexy Sweet!
    Thanks for sharing those skills.
    Mucho love, peace, Timothy


  • SuZyCuE
    December 3, 2008

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    Beautifuly Sexy

    Sometimes three lines can tell an entire story, and you did just that. Great Job...


    • ariazephyrzoe gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      Suzzane, thank you so much. I am happy to see you here on my page, miss you

      and


      Anna Lee


  • bigperm
    December 1, 2008
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    you have really reinked a translation of that language with your keystrokes.


  • Sgt B
    November 30, 2008
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    Sensual & sexy

    Sometimes it's hard to describe what one "feels".
    I think you did a great job here.


  • tara wilson gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    very sensual & a pretty blush=)


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 30, 2008

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    Ummm okay,
    hahahahaha

    VERY well said for just three lines Anna
    I'm gonna go check out what inspired this write now.

    All the best to you

    Ken

    P.s Thanks for the heads up on my last poem


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    I really liked the soft blush here...and of course the touching - and the effect, Anna Lee! Lovely!

    ~ Nicolette


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    you are an amazing talent. with three small lines
    you truly got to me. Love, Lane


  • Mari Goes gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Oh girl, this is good, actually very good!
    when I saw the title I thought, hm, I don't associate pretty with being pinched, but now I feel like wanting some pinches too
    You do wonders with few words. Loved the sensuality here and the warm feeling that comes from your lines.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    very nice my friend..

    one question, what is frisson? don't believe i ever heard of that before..i


    • ariazephyrzoe gold member
      November 29, 2008
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      Thank you Rich I like to think frisson like blushing lol

      frisson...a moment of excitement, a thrill, something like that

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