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...Visions of a Dream...

 

 

 


Hotchocolate simmered in porcelain, pinched
beautifully with cream to outline cravings
along pouted curves, tongue traced. 

Ecstasy bittersweet, berry 
offering nibbled;
both picked for play.

Unadulterated pleasure stained palate,
melted caramel lover atop heated trivet
during lap dance;
mouth agape, more jazz music to come.

Instinct initiated tension, circulated tightened
muscles that wanted flexibility tested, tried
horizontal and vertical then satisfaction in the
middle with tongue plunged to force tremors.

Titillation ricocheted, lack of resistance melted
clothes onto floor with trail towards love nest.

Orbs crossed over boundaries, fixated on flesh
exposed for friction so wick ignited,  tempted
to do piroquettes below the belt-
Dark stewards stared at Angel,  quite jealous
of private
teachings, touches in their wake.

Silver teeth unlocked its jaws, anxiously released
from remote cavern a massive creature in size.
Head swollen, thickness- full mass to manipulate
into your compressed corridors.

You beckoned it forward, sacrificed self to him
for untamed pet to devour, deflower deep
within lubricated labyrinth.

Rain seeped from secured confines when five
soldiers groped ground zero- five more fondled
erected mounds momentarily
kept leather bound in Victoria's Secret dungeon.

I recall y
ou almost hyperventilated after previous
collision in cabin with other half, piano harmony 
plus champagne brought Sonata before fireplace.
A flicker of flesh gave impression all was not done,
paradise had more to unveil- taste within angelic
porcelain cocoa stained with cream.

                



 

 

 

 

Author notes

I kind of exited stage left here~ and tried to keep it short...
Really I did...

PROMPT:

What I want you to do is go through my writes pick one that you like and answer it. I want you to write something in reference to the write that you have chosen. Anything goes just label your writes appropriately. Please I do not want to read a book and you can write any form you want.

Put the write that you chose in your authors notes

Verse from Hotchocolate: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4810455
Dream Vision~
A secluded cabin up in the mountains with my love as we sit next to the fireplace keeping each other warm. Drinking champagne with our arms entwined feeding each other sweet red strawberries as I lick the juice from his chin. Feeling his soft touch as I feel the moment of bliss. Gazing into his eyes feeling my heart play the song of love. My breath trying to catch up with the beat almost making me hyperventilate . My true paradise right here with me playing bounds of harmony like a piano upon my skin. Room filled with passion as our bodies collide as one. A vision living in my own paradise which is in his arms forever.

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    This is wonderful and you did what I asked for! Thanks for your entry and good luck


  • HaleyMary
    December 2, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Sis. Lots of passion expressed and beautiful imagery. The ending really says it all. Thanks for sharing your talent and best of luck in the contest.

  • mcfreeman
    December 1, 2008
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    cocoa stained with cream.

    says it all