As she dreams
he hovers over her
Within the realm of fantasy
she opens the valley
of her pleasure.
In shivering cascades
she feels the heat
of his love.
Twisting and turning
inside of her
To a pinnacle of pleasure
that is beyond comprehension.
All she remember of her dream
Is a feeling deep inside of her
and a slight kiss
that took her breath away
before he vanished,
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel by hotchocolate.
1100 points, ended December 13, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow~
Now this grabs the reader to read several times for the images tug and pull~
Excellent Jeff
You are so good at brevity also storytelling where one gets engrossed within the words-
and can't help but drop jaw
Bravo!!!
Thank You for sharing Your Passion and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Good job here I enjoyed this thanks for entering and good luck!
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that sounds like a lovely and heated kind of dream the kind a person doesn't wish to wake up from, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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