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Dancing on the Glory Land Express



There she is the most beautiful woman in the World
With her co-anchor signing autographs at the Fair
Her beauty overwhelms them
She awes them into silence
They must improve themselves to be worthy
Of her attention

He tells her he is a stweet musician
A poet and a one man band
She signs her picture 'To Wes' 'The Sheet Magician'
What on Earth can she possibly mean?
Has she read his poetry?
It must be lonely on the Mountain Top.




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  • catz Moderators member
    December 11, 2008

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    We don't normally think that one tiny moment in time can make any difference but what if it does? What if the earth could stop for just a moment, what if time literally stood still... just for a second.
    It's mind boggling, the things that didn't happen all over the world, in that one tiny second. What a difference indeed.

    A good poem to contemplate, Wesley
    You've done it again, written as only you can do it


    Dee


  • Sandygram
    December 3, 2008

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    Wonderful Poem!

    Hi Wesley, Hope you enjoyed the Thanksgiving holiday. I love the words at the ending, it made me smile. A stark picture of Mother Earth. A pleasure to read. You take care, Sandy