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Discovering Dawn

woke up early,
for school.

outside the window,
a sunrise.

a gift for
my educated boredom.

A contest entry

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  • Aurielle
    December 9, 2008
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    lol I can tell you were bored but school is nothing boring to wake up too...perhaps your meaning was suppose to mean that you were annoyed of waking upp daily for the same thing "school".

    educated boredom...
    a boredom is educated? Check your grammar I think
    I think your whole write though kinda sound quite funny