In desperation,
I sought you--
one whom I once loved,
to tell me
all the things we dreamed of
were still within our grasp.
But the things that we once fought for
seemed to fade away;
maintaining the rule
that love is blind
but dies before its time.
A contest entry
- "Death Magnetic" by sheltered.
700 points, ended December 11, 2008, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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love sucks
hmmm...
i've said that many times before
but then again have yet to be convinced otherwise
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There is truth in your words
This poem is well written, of a love once close, now a fading dream. And so true are your words, for where love is left to linger too long in the mist, it will surely die before its time. Well written indeed and good luck in contest.
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