your touch set my heart on fire
my soul floating beyond the rainbow's end
two bodies still glistening with sweat
reflections from the candlelight
cast a single silhouette on the window shade
together we lay naked, warmed by the fireplace
beautifully and completely exhausted
after making love
on your new grey flannel sheets
the fly on the wall can't help but whisper
caught off guard by our x-rated picture show
and the shadows that danced around the room
Author notes
-Rainbow
- Together
- Glisten
- Grey
- Fly
- Whisper
Option #4 word bank~~~I used all the words
A contest entry
- With prompts in mind..... by Hannie.
700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is so great! I love reading these kind of meaningful writes. So well done.
Dani. -
Woot. Awesome write. I absaloutly love your style. Poor Fly lol. Keep up the awesome work and good luck in the contest!!
Hannie. -
And you did it well
the word bank that is....the other I'll take your word for! A brother just doesn't need to know everything! LOL I love ya, The Shaker
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