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Life in Harmony

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Nothing in the song

of the people suggests they

are about to die,

 

Cries of all the ghosts

of the past remind them soon,

they will join them;

 

And yet they rejoice

in their short mortal lives, with

music in their souls.

 

 

 

Author notes

"The point is not to understand life,
The point is to love life."
~ Dostoevsky


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Triple haiku, inspired by Basho's 'Cicadas' haiku.

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  • tstock
    July 24

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    great thoughts

    i love haiku--your work is quite nice.

    here is one for you.

    cool clover carpet,
    seduce my bare feet with dew.
    summer night, my muse.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 29, 2008

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    the mind can only just smile at this beautiful poem, i mean this is amazing, and kind of inspiring, well not really kind of, it is all the way inspiring, keep it flowing


  • Mr. Bleu
    November 29, 2008
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    It flows so nicely
    And is beautifully penned
    And haiku 3 .... wow.


  • DogFish silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    laugh!

    ...or write haiku!


  • Desire gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Oh My Word~

    Wow~ You make the Haiku just flow-blend so Beautifully I have to take a picture of it
    Powerful message~ and the third one tugs hard at the Soul~ Bravo!
    Excellent form~ I pop brain cells trying this one

    Physical picture- adds to Your Inspiration
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Nice work here.

    The last was my fave. It was... real. If that makes any sense.

    Be well!

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