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Unforgetable Too...

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It’s been forever and a day I saw you.
Remembering how handsome your red hair,
soft brown eyes, looking back at me too.
Loving you always was without compare.

We promised always to love forever,
that autumn day, October, years ago.
Pain and sorrow was worth the endeavor,
still vivid, my memory is aglow.

Winter nights you held me so tenderly
Wrapped in your arms, like a thermal blanket.
Whispering loving secrets so dearly,
I giggled like little chirping crickets.

Dreaming about those years of yesterday,
unforgettable we  loved in that day..
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Sandra R Reynolds

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  • Tqop
    April 10
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    That's so beautiful.

  • excellent


  • thepoetssoul
    February 2

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    What a beautiful Sonnet you have written here.
    The emotion and love within is heart warming.
    May you be blessed in all you ever do sweet soul.

    Tony


  • Blondie19
    February 1
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    Oh my gosh this is just like me and my boyfriend who actually goes on here he is dreamcloud a


  • crimsondew
    December 3, 2008
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    So heartfelt and beautiful dear...love clearly glows in these lines...


  • Lola Lola
    November 29, 2008
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    beautifully written


  • peregrin
    November 29, 2008

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    Name in the authors notes please.

    Um... wow.
    That made me cry.
    This is touching...
    damn...
    Thanks for your entry.
    =)
    Gwen

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