Mesmerizing dreams
This delicate petal rose
His voice rubs as
A petal kindly pass
My ear but it can
Neither speak nor kiss me
This tease of sweet
Smell that surrounds me
His presence
like a half heart
I swell soundlessly
lilies that floats
From my soul
Of something passionate
When with this dream?
Conversations that
daze me in like
The air dancing
unseen
For the sunlight
Can not see
“When will we kiss?
I want to be the brunet
Upon his skin
Or the same brown
In his eyes”
If love can give up
And become friends with joy once again
To silence the triumph
I would harvest a tree for each bird?
I would…because
All I want is to be with him
my man
I want to see the singer
Who sings this beautiful song?
With this voice
At least to tell him
this singer’s face
That I’m in love with his voice
To know he heard me
“You are my favorite singer”
Author notes
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OOOOH WEEEE! makes me wanna sing! Dooo Daaa Dooo Daaa....ok, um, enough of that, its late. WOW! another awesome awesome write, i am so diggin your work here. I agree with Writeous (one of my fav poets by the way) that your imagery is off the chain, it has that oldie, yet todays way of high def, 3D pictures and thats hard to do. aw man, such a wonderful talent. Much love and respect
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nice poem cum see mines
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Truly amazing. Nice detials
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Oh my God, this is super beautiful. Your ways of expressing are nice, the flow is deep. I like it so much. Awwwwwwwweeeeeeee, this is way to beautiful. your imagineries are well said. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing
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This is a great poem you wrote. Can you please put in your authors box what option you had chosen thank you. Best of luck in my contest!
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AWWWWWW... the imagery here is beautiful..so far that i have seen, you are the Queen at make the images come to life
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