Why did you choose her?
She’s such a slut!
It can’t be her looks or the shape of her butt,
Please tell me you don’t love her, why isn’t it me?
Your falling for her aren’t you, why couldn’t I see?
You like her bright smile and the way that she laughs,
But I gave you my heart and you broke it in half,
I want to kill her and make her feel my pain
But it’s not her fault, that I’m trapped in your game.
A contest entry
- emotion quickie. [1/4♥] by innocence jaded.xx.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very ventful and very vengeful, but I liked it. Your emotions were strong and definitely there, and you penned jealousy wonderfully. Thank you for entering & good luck :] ♥
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very angry and sad
i think that the pain is much worst when you know you lost him to another girl, so my heart goes out to you, i know its very difficult but go with someone else and try to get on with your life im goin thru the same thing and im telling you the pain doesnt ease at all but it effects alot of things that you do in the future including people you might hurt like he hurt you! brillianly put with your feelings though!
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