In the heat of my thoughts
I find
the greatest passion.
In a list
A contest entry
- Micro-Poetry by Yemassee.
631 points, ended December 3, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very well written.
you express emotions clearly and precisely.
i'm not a big fan of the spacing though. -
Now this is good...the easy route would have been to compare passion to the typical things, but you use it to show how powerful our thoughts are...and they are...most great passion begins there...in our thoughts...or so I am now saying.
Whether it is a passion we conceive or one that is made better by our imagination...it's our thoughts that are the impetus.
Thanks for entering the contest!
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i can only smile at this, a thought comes to mind, long or short, you pen flows with the blood of a poet golden, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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exothermic -- what a word to get into poetry. Nice job
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