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Sun Rose




Sun rose,

the sky lit blue,

trees, ever green;

ordinary miracles.


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  • Malabu
    December 2, 2008
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    nature is magical
    you have shown it here
    mal


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Ah, Oliva, you captured
    in perfect simplicity
    nature's miracles
    so frequently
    overlooked.

    M-C


  • Mirthryl
    November 30, 2008

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    Very nice! The title brings an additional color and plant to mind. Observant "ordinary miracles"--just because they are commonplace does not alter the nature of the miracles.


  • Yemassee gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    I sometimes take walks in the woods and it's hard not to see those "ordinary" miracles...the amazing beauty in nature. And we do have a lot of evergreens in this area so I know that beauty you write about.

    Thanks for entering the contest, I appreciate it.