All a while i've waited
and preteneded to be happy with a smile
just to see you happy was enough
to keep me going for a while.
but the shadows in the darkness,
Just grow and grow, and i cannot fight them alone.
and feeling like i belong in the dark
i hear your voice break through the shadows that lurk in my heart
Dont hide, stop running, you've done enough fighting,
you belong with me, not in the dark.
so take my hand and c'mon out.
and all i have to say is:
please dont let this be another dream....
Please tell me what you think
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Very touching...
"please dont let this be another dream...."
I could really feel what you are experiencing through your words. We try to be strong and brave; keeping a smile on our face while hurting deep inside and sometimes residing in the darkness. You are a very brave person. You are right; our true place is meant not to be in the darkness. I like this part too;
"Dont hide, stop running, you've done enough fighting,
you belong with me, not in the dark.
so take my hand and c'mon out."
All of your write is really something! Thank you for sharing your work with us!
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dark and sad write. like others, i am still looking for the light and feel better somehow. i have been away from my old problems and i guess eventually it will catch up to me and how will i turn the light on. shoo the darkness away? =) thank you for sharing.
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Nicely written, and when we are lost in the dark we need to never stop reaching for those loving hands that are reaching out toward us to pull us back into the warmth of the light. I wish you peace and happiness. Thanks so much for sharing this. Blessings, Patty
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What an amazing write so full of such vivid imagery and emotion. I am still searching for the light in my life as well, I am so tired of living with deep depression and worry and with the demons from my past. I will be praying for you. hugs Theresa
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