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On the Bixby Bridge

Along Big Sur,
white caps, rocky shore.
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  • Yemassee gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Who needs more than 11 words when they have such beauty before them. I've of course heard of it, but have never seen that area before but I bet it is beautiful. Is the Bixby bridge real, do you like near there...no reason, it just adds to the poem for me.

    You've caught not only a scene but a moment...a snapshot. Thanks!