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silly, lovestruck me

we're back again with the story of
the maiden
she was doing okay
but the boy still haunted her dreams
and she had those silly fairy tale stories
still stuck in her head
which was stupid
because she really had no chance

but nonetheless, she kept on going
and hung out with the princess
and the other maiden and their knights
in aluminum foil
and that was also really stupid
because it only tore at her heart more

but sooner or later
she got used to the idea
of her crush dating her best friend
and it turned to teasing
the joke was on the princess now

but little did they all know
that this teasing soon turned to tears
and more drama followed them

Hate turned the corner and announced "I'm home!"
and the maiden's heart froze with Hate
they walked hand in hand
and talked to the princess
through the magic mirror on the wall
and broke her heart into little shards
of dirty glass

the princess fought back
but it was no use
the maiden had a new best friend: Hate
and she couldnt care less what the princess
ever thought of her
no matter how much she cursed the maiden
or beat her
the maiden only smiled
and remembered how she used to love the boy, saying,
"silly, lovestruck me"

Author notes

fifth and final part of the my life series. this series was about my eighth grade year. i might write about my dramafilled summer and even perhaps dig into my freshman year but that will come later. thanks for reading these gay, pointless poems, guys, i love you all!

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Comments

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  • grace elizabeth
    December 10, 2008
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    um its not gay or poitnless.
    these are cute.
    i like this one.

  • Clarabelll
    November 29, 2008

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    Princess- Sabirna
    Maiden- Kali
    Maidens best friend- idk..me? idk

    I love it!
    "their knights
    in aluminum foil"
    By that do you mean like fake knights?

    • Iris Doyle
      November 29, 2008
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      youre right for the three on top and i mean that ryan and alex arent exactly your basic prince charming

      • Clarabelll
        November 29, 2008
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        so wait in this the princess is the maidens best friend right.

        • Iris Doyle
          November 30, 2008
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          the princess it the OTHER maiden's best friend. as in princess (sabrina) and other maiden (you) are bffs after our fight. sorry for the confusion.

      • Clarabelll
        November 29, 2008
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        They aren't really.. you right!

  • xhappygirlforeverx
    November 29, 2008
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    im confusedddd. iassumed 'Hate' is a person. am i right ?

    • Iris Doyle
      November 29, 2008
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      whoa. hi hannah.
      uhh no its like a feeling. i take feelings and turn them into people in my poem. so in otherwords, i took hate along with me when i broke up with sabrina.

  • eronrox
    November 29, 2008

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    oh this is the past.
    GOD
    okay
    sorry for that
    i'm trying really hard to understand this.
    um
    is the princess emma?
    andyou're the maiden
    adn the maidens best friend is clare?
    errr i like it if i understood it moreee.

    • eronrox
      November 29, 2008
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      okay okay the only thing i think i don't understand it this hate thing?

    • eronrox
      November 29, 2008
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      wait hannah suggested that hate is a person?
      what? is hate a person that you don't like orr what?

      • Iris Doyle
        November 29, 2008
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        uhh no its like a feeling. i take feelings and turn them into people in my poem. so in otherwords, i took hate along with me when i broke up with sabrina.

        • eronrox
          November 30, 2008
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          thats what i thought until i talked to hannah
          i thought hate was just a feeling pretending it was a personish
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