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Forever

And I watched them
shade the night sky
    with mist...
The stars were lost
            Forever.

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  • Soul Blight
    February 17
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    Awesome

    I liked this poem. Short and very descriptive. Great job!


  • Jesann gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Mmm very nice.
    Love the lines "shade the night sky
    With mist...."
    Lovely !!!
    Congratulations on the HM.


  • poetrandy
    November 29, 2008

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    Different!

    WOW! What an interesting short poem! They "shade the night sky with mist..." -- very nice line! No mention of "fog"! Good luck in the contest!


    • Cloudwalker
      November 29, 2008
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      Thank you.... Actually i decided to use mist and fog interchangeably.