You had a feast
for kings,
you over ate...
...kitchen closed.
A contest entry
- Micro-Poetry by Yemassee.
631 points, ended December 3, 2008, 31 entries
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This one sounds like me...I mean the literal reading of it.
Of course I see the deeper one...that of someone taking advantage of another person's affections or kindness. But the poem ends with "...kitchen closed" so the game is over for the naive who would-be King.
This was nicely done, I'm glad you entered it in my contest, thanks.
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Thank you! I really had fun with this challenge as far as editing down to 11 words, I wanted to preserve the literal as well as the hidden, which I'm glad you saw both
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sound like me...tho, i should be house! but helps to be very active also. great write.
Good luck
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