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Winter Friend

Missing image

A visit from far away,
came to my window.
He was here to stay
presence cast a shadow.

Each morning I looked,
peeking through the panes
Seeds, thistle, white corn cracked,
many different kinds of grains.

His chirping sang me a lullaby,
spring arrived we said goodbye…

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Prompt:
write about the photo of the bird in the snow.

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  • White Tiger 96
    November 29, 2008

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    Lovely job!! I think you really made a wonderful piece here. It rhymes wonderfully and sounds beautiful!!!! Great Job!!! Thanks for entering my contest. Keep writing, I look forward to reading more from you.


  • PinkPony
    November 29, 2008
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    Oh, the dearest poem! Sweetly penned with splendid lines that warm my heart.