Winters frozen tears,
Pour into my heart,
and I become glass
Author notes
This is for the ' Eleven Words Contest '
A contest entry
- Micro-Poetry by Yemassee.
631 points, ended December 3, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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So sweet. So sad. so short. But i like it a lot. Keep up the good stuff!
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I know different times of the year affect my moods, and when we combine that with other factors in life, it isn't surprising that we become something less than opaque.
Thanks, I'm glad you entered the poem in my contest.
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ooo..I like the imagery in this piece. great write!
good luck
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Excellent.
I love this simplicity of it. Good work love.
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