Asleep in the tower of vision
Shadows deep
Chilling naked separation
Eyes wide shut
Chaos by default
All hosts, all guests
Everyone’s invited
System failures
Deceit, resistance
Descent
Untidy fragments
Impoverished existence
Eternally repeated storms
Ragged, tired flesh
Tumors ever growing
Ever gathering
Looming front and center
All around and through
Terror without, terror within
Signs are everywhere
Wisdom drifts in
A cold dark castle inhabited
Murky, musty, moldy
Huddled in a Chamber of chains
Extroverts of confined belief
Heavily sedated
Sleepwalking souls
Chatter upholds the day’s events
Noise without soul
No vacancies, no rents
Between love and loneliness,
Everyone is tripping
Unconscious realms
Grasping at grains of sand that can’t remain
To stop a wave’s curling brow
Tears and shrills of mindful pain
Silence
Shift begins
Signs and symbols appear
East wind blows west
On the move
Dawning here
A mind of its own
Time flows backward
Abrupt recollection
A beautiful curse
Feelings shall not come of words
Anthems are of a bygone era
Moon murmurs
A wave; a lost memory
Float up from the depth
Its your first time out
A sweet recollection
This ambient sleepy time
A gentle calling
Emptiness in a slow mind
Meditation
Intermission
Breath now creates the score
The river still flows
Downstream it goes
Nothingness beholds everything
Everything, nothing
Eyes wide open
Steel sunrise
The aroma of love
Compassion for a dead industry of fools
So newly dead
Freeing me
This interlude pondering my place
My space in now
My belonging
Forgiveness rules
Acceptance abounds
Separateness faded
Paradise uncovered
My infinite requiem
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel..whatever you want by SilencefillsMySoul.
900 points, ended November 29, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - misery loves company by solitarytear.
600 points, ended December 6, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2012 believe it or not? Big Points by A m b r e a.
1000 points, ended December 11, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I got 3 Options can you turn them into what i want to read by Theory Of The Lost.
550 points, ended December 8, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you feel the shift?
Comments
-
Wow this is powerful, the flow, the words, the thoughts. such a beautiful piece.
Abrupt recollection
A beautiful curse
Feelings shall not come of words
Anthems are of a bygone era
Moon murmurs
A wave; a lost memory
I love this! Well done! thank you for entering and good luck!! -
The magic behind this poem is strong. The imagery is even stronger. I like to see myself in a poem and it was like I was looking back at myself in a mirror. Please read my message about Surrender for a complete review. Well done.




