Bricks, walls, masks and veils
through each one, live different tales
Behind the face we live and breathe
a fortress myth we all conceive
Will one ever know the truth
beyond which mind invokes the sleuth?
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (F) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a good poem. It is thought provoking. Perhpas "lies" would go better in the 2nd line instead of "live". Hmm, not sure. I think you forced it a bit in the last line though. Perhpas I am reading it incorrectly but sleuth just doesn't quite seem to hold the power there.
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