"You should have seen the world before it died,"
repeated the tablet, the script aglow.
"Shame.......anyhow, that Trilogy aside,
for millions of years' lease and hyper show,
but touch less cost than a terra firma,
consider planets with multiple rings -
the perfect theatrical arena,
for compendiums of perverse meetings.
Picture the panoramic over-views,
the circuit of thrills and spills - the holy,
v unholy v chimeric to-dos.......
the drama, c'est magnifique! Certainly,
lifetimes to lifetimes folly guaranteed.
Hear I, O High Majesties your stampede?"
Author notes
If sonnet does not read with the first line quoted, it will be dsq.
But sorry no smiley face; however my angle of approach may raise the smile?
A contest entry
- A sonnet please, by Titus.
700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
Holy moses, this was more like a tongue twister, I nearly tripped up reading this, in spite of a great storyline. It seems almost athiest in its package, and their are debates on offer here, which aliken this to a period during henry viii's reign which goes very much to what you are saying. It's as if you provoke the apocalypse,
Adding your comment:
