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sickness of the human

my spirit drops from the skies
camraflash in disguise
so dirty even god is surprised
as the darkness gives rise  

clean me wash my sins
so i can throw my rubbish to the bins
corrupt evil tries to win
condensing my soul in a tin

bless me now oh god
as i fight naked
the unknown beast
eats my body to feast


my humanness hides
as the spiritual collides
this war ends tonight
as my demon takes flight

wash, clean, bless me
oh god free me from

sin 

 

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all about spiriual being crotrled

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  • mystic
    December 7, 2008

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    simple&sweet

    poet of justice be sure,that ur sins are washed when u regret them from all ur heart.....and thank u for this beautiful piece.....


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 5, 2008

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    This is really a touching piece whoing your heart and its faithful emotions for HIM..very warm yet deep poetry is here..


  • Violinstrings silver member
    December 5, 2008
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    wonderful

    i will come back with applause
    great way to describe sickness