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Littered with dreams

Flying flying flying
there is no denying

your love soothes me
in realms of ecstasy

Caring caring caring
my baby is so caring

soft and gentle angel
that heaven gave to me

I'm flying flying flying
there is no denying

everytime I hear her voice
it's like a sweet and gentle breeze

Smiling smiling smiling
her love is so beguiling

she gets deep inside my soul
and sets my spirit free

I'm dancing dancing dancing
prancing and romancing

in the glow of love and
it feel so damn good to me

People say that I'm tripping
I just laugh and keep on dipping

into this ocean of ecstasy

Her love is so elating
my sadness is quickly fading

no more darkness in my life
just warm and sunny days

Cause I'm flying flying flying
baby, there's no denying

you're my angel and I'm so
glad you belong to me

I'm crying crying crying
overjoyed, it's so exciting

to imagine a love like yours
sweet and gentle flower,
you are my destiny

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This poem was inspired by the contest title -"littered with dreams"

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  • Aurielle
    December 9, 2008

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    I love the clear repetition of movement and the picture to the side helped me to feel your feelings. This is so cute. If a man wrote this fro me I would believe him and kiss him muah

  • michaeline
    December 4, 2008

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    This reminds me of a song.That is what it reads like,but it is good.Good luck to you in the contest.The flow was nice and you were clear and easy to understand and relate to.Great job.


  • rose petal desires
    November 30, 2008

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    you are surely inspired here i see uncle Gerry this is another very deep write of the scent of love good wishes to you in the contest


  • Randomly Beautiful
    November 29, 2008
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    Than littered with dreams should be the title of your poem.


    • darell
      November 30, 2008
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      dance for me

      I changed my title to the prompt title.
      sorry, I thought you just wanted us to use
      your title for inspiration of the prompt.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    Ooooo..... this is so sweet here you did a great job on this prompt here! Good luck hon

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