Flying flying flying
there is no denying
your love soothes me
in realms of ecstasy
Caring caring caring
my baby is so caring
soft and gentle angel
that heaven gave to me
I'm flying flying flying
there is no denying
everytime I hear her voice
it's like a sweet and gentle breeze
Smiling smiling smiling
her love is so beguiling
she gets deep inside my soul
and sets my spirit free
I'm dancing dancing dancing
prancing and romancing
in the glow of love and
it feel so damn good to me
People say that I'm tripping
I just laugh and keep on dipping
into this ocean of ecstasy
Her love is so elating
my sadness is quickly fading
no more darkness in my life
just warm and sunny days
Cause I'm flying flying flying
baby, there's no denying
you're my angel and I'm so
glad you belong to me
I'm crying crying crying
overjoyed, it's so exciting
to imagine a love like yours
sweet and gentle flower,
you are my destiny
Author notes
This poem was inspired by the contest title -"littered with dreams"
A contest entry
- Heart first: by Randomly Beautiful.
1000 points, ended January 24, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the clear repetition of movement and the picture to the side helped me to feel your feelings. This is so cute. If a man wrote this fro me I would believe him and kiss him muah
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This reminds me of a song.That is what it reads like,but it is good.Good luck to you in the contest.The flow was nice and you were clear and easy to understand and relate to.Great job.


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you are surely inspired here i see uncle Gerry this is another very deep write of the scent of love good wishes to you in the contest
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Than littered with dreams should be the title of your poem.
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dance for me
I changed my title to the prompt title.
sorry, I thought you just wanted us to use
your title for inspiration of the prompt.
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Ooooo..... this is so sweet here you did a great job on this prompt here! Good luck hon


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