If you ever fall
Be sure I'd catch you
Without fail
I'd catch you within my two arm's
And embrace you till your heart stop's beating so fast.
So why is it that you up and left one day,
Put down my heart and said sorry,
But i can't do this to my mum.
You had broken the very best of me,
I thought we were getting married.
You had promised to stay with me
And to never let me go,
When indeed that is what you have done so.
What have i done to deserve this?
All i wanted was your tender kiss
Your warm embrace,
And the touch of your hands on my face.
I can't make you love me,
Nor the devil can,
So your loves got to be true
Please dont say you were confused.
My heart just couldn't take it
If all we had was fake.
Tell me that you love me
And that it will forever be.
Author notes
"2nd poem entered"
A contest entry
- Pissed Love by Hateful Apathy.
2200 points, ended December 14, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Pfft, what Alyx said.
I did rather like "What have I done to deserve this? All I wanted was your tender kiss"
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Thanks
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Mhmm, no problem. And of course she read your poem. It's her job as a vice-judge.
No one has the ultimate power of me though. 
Tell her I said that.
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O.K. :s
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Hm...It's alright. The syllables were a little off and it didn't really have form. But I do see where you're going with this, and I know what you mean by feeling this way. I liked it, mostly because I could relate.
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Thankyou for reading my poem.
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