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SOLD...Too Late


Don’t look so handsome
“for sale” sign
was taken down
yesterday…

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Prompt micro-poetry, 11 words

A contest entry

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    Oh, clever! Too late, but....
    still tempted?

    Aesthete2000


  • Yemassee gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Yet another excellent entry! Even though it's just an 11 word contest, it may be the best quality entries I've had in the 48 or so contests I've done!

    And here, what I like is the honesty behind the humor...here it is, just one day after (she?) is taken off the market and there she is...still looking...I have a feeling that house will be up for sale again pretty soon!

    You know the old saying, "Buyer beware!" I hope he was..

    Thanks for entering, this was fun!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    ha ha...this is kinda cute

    good luck