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[ "I'd be happy to die for a taste of what Angel had - someone to live for; unafraid to say 'I love

"I'd be happy to die for a taste of what Angel had - someone to live for; unafraid to say 'I love you'"

Angel, indeed.
Only a man unafraid
to be criticized and bashed on
by those who can't show the real them
lives in comfortable bliss knowing he has
the only one he needs.
Even as his body gives way,
he feels more alive each day,
side by side with his love,
singing sweet melodies
and drumming away...

Oh how death enhances life --
those who know they're going
get more out of life

if you just live like each day is your last.

Author notes

I love Rent so much, Angel is fantastic.

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  • DramaQueen469
    December 3, 2008

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    Wow I love this! Nice flow and the poem is just gorgeous. Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~


  • LuckyBlackCat
    November 30, 2008
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    this ones good.
    i like that its from rent.
    this one is good.
    heehee.


  • StarIlluminated
    November 29, 2008

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    Wow Emma this is really good. Although I havne't seen Rent, I really like this poem because it flows nicely and really describes what you wanna say.

    *KT*