"Little Bo Peep has lost her sheep
and can't tell where to find them."
So don’t be such a creep
Look! In the square there's a mayhem
Author notes
Prompt: "Little Bo Peep has lost her sheep
and can't tell where to find them."
A contest entry
- Little Bo Peep by Emerald Lass.
650 points, ended November 29, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Favorite Nursery Rhyme by Tqop.
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Comments
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It's funny and unique. I like the rhyme. The last line should probably have "the" in it.
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Awesome.
Very interesting.
I love this.
It's very awesome, and creative.
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I laughed really big, although silently, so I would not disturb anybody and everybody here is already disturbed... very...
I admire your humor so MUCH! 
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LOL. Great job. I like the use of the word mayhem in this poem.
Mike
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